tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post5244283876568964085..comments2024-01-09T18:40:53.465-08:00Comments on Ramblings of a Creative Double Dipper: Seduced by Moonlight--chapter 13Christwriterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17590823821715820817noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post-89431761860877781612014-05-28T21:37:49.790-07:002014-05-28T21:37:49.790-07:00I think what bugs me is how little LKH wants to co...I think what bugs me is how little LKH wants to commit to something. She doesn't want any of her characters to be unhappy--EVER. Problem with that is, Merry loves ALL of her men, and she can only be married to one. A good, logical plot would be to have Merry go "fuck that shit" and smash all the rules to itty bitty pieces because most of these rules are FUCKING WRONG. But that would involve politics and probably dead people, so instead, LKH has multiple baby daddies. Instead of dealing with the consequences of her world-building, which is, you know, THE ENTIRE POINT OF WORLD BUILDING, LKH just draws a back door into the corner.<br /><br />I was kind of hoping for plot's sake that Baby-Daddy Three would be Taranis. It's an awful thing to hope for, seeing as how he raped her at one point, but the politics would have given the book, you know, A PLOT. But what I read implies that's not the case. <br /><br />Yep. Sage is the size of a doll. I swear to fucking God this series is "Let's represent ALL THE KINKS...badly."Christwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17590823821715820817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post-84608910513135270142014-05-28T21:32:05.119-07:002014-05-28T21:32:05.119-07:00Hi Anon
chapter twelve should be here http://crea...Hi Anon<br /><br />chapter twelve should be here http://creativedoubledipper.blogspot.com/2014/05/seduced-by-moonlight-chapter-12.htmlChristwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17590823821715820817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post-58235524918322248982014-05-28T19:56:28.047-07:002014-05-28T19:56:28.047-07:00The “three babies, eight fathers” thing actually d...The “three babies, eight fathers” thing actually doesn’t bother me at all. I mean, they’re fairies and gods and it’s magic and stuff, I figure it’s just a given that the regular rules wouldn’t apply.<br /><br />Wait, Sage is the size of a doll? SOMEHOW I HAD MISSED THAT UP UNTIL NOW AHAHAHA<br /><br />..the flowers? What, does he pollinate them like a fucking bee?<br /><br />Scalding wave? That sounds HORRIBLE<br /><br />That scene doesn’t read as arousing so much as LSD-inducedRFhttp://a-sporking-rat.livejournal.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post-66817728919033152982014-05-28T16:39:38.795-07:002014-05-28T16:39:38.795-07:00chapter 12? Why it doesn't show?chapter 12? Why it doesn't show?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post-34399634059957062042014-05-28T11:02:40.321-07:002014-05-28T11:02:40.321-07:00I spit out my tea when I hit the "The Penis I...I spit out my tea when I hit the "The Penis Is Lava" part :) Also, is the sun is beating between her legs, does that mean she's going to have a sunburned snatch? Because 1) OW and 2) DEAR GODS NO. Gah. What a way to take a reader out of a moment (if they were in the moment in the first place, I guess.<br /><br />Also, er, if one is into the Eiffel Tower as a thing, there are ways to do it that are comfy. It's very distracting, though, and I can't imagine someone keeping up a detailed internal monologue during without accidentally hurting someone. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com