tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post3765415804151687814..comments2024-01-09T18:40:53.465-08:00Comments on Ramblings of a Creative Double Dipper: Deed of Paksenarrion chapter 2-3Christwriterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17590823821715820817noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3350096535937978369.post-79129363268389365712014-02-24T11:02:08.447-08:002014-02-24T11:02:08.447-08:00Dealing with the aftermath rather than directly sh...Dealing with the aftermath rather than directly showing the titillating* details: Good. Using an attempted rape to advance the plot and provide character development for the men: Not so good.<br /><br />* And no matter how it's done, if it's "on screen" someone will find it titillating.<br /><br />This whole thing is a pretty good sign that something is wrong with this mercenary group. It's clearly a competent organization, with systems set in place to investigate criminal acts within the group, yet it fell completely for a set of blatant lies. It also managed to miss that one of its NCOs is acting out of character and has been obviously drugged and/or mind-blasted.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05828438966741169694noreply@blogger.com